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My Angel.

Views (140) Love Created on 1-19-08 Flag
 You're my angel,
 your hearts angelic,
Though I've already said it,
You sincerity I can't forget it.
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I know you're sensitive in everyway
A girl that wants to be loved like everyday
Rain or shine, So I mentioned your name
In every line, Though many people think
I'm crazy out of my mind, But really
I'm just running out of time.
.
You're my angel,
 your hearts angelic,
Though I've already said it,
You sincerity I can't forget it.
.
A love like yours doesn't last forever
So once I had it I could never
Let it go, Because loves forever
Though I don't admit it face to face
But in my heart you have your place.
.
You're my angel,
 your hearts angelic,
Though I've already said it,
You sincerity I can't forget it.
.
I had  a  girl with a heart so true
My thoughts are here to be renewed
I must admit I had a few (lovers)
But none of them have ever been like this
And for the other women they can only wish
Girl, I miss your lips
The taste of your kiss in the rain
The way when you say everythings going to be ok
How it washes away my pains... I hold inside
Like I've opened my eyes to some new tides in my life.
.
You're my angel,
 your hearts angelic,
Though I've already said it,
You sincerity I can't forget it.
.
In my art, I'll make you shine, even though I know your
Not mine, To hold, I know this song will touched
Your soul, in one way or another, I'm sorry I hurt you
In any way, I know what they say and it don't mean
nothing and I know sometimes words aren't very trusting
But I'm will to put it all on the line for just one more time
With you....
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On March 21st 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem It's lovely! Good work!
On March 10th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said :
EvilRaven9892 love the flow you had going on there. loved it so sweet makes me wanna give u a hug b/c of how sweet you can be.
On February 14th 2008 ManicPixie27 Said :
ManicPixie27 I like it... It's really really sweet n honest.
On February 14th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll aww~ i like i like. it's sweet~
On February 11th 2008 bluedevilschic Said :
bluedevilschic nicely done. she's really lucky to have a guy like u. good job.
On January 19th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth Is her name Angel as well? just curious Nice poem. Keep em coming!
On January 19th 2008 Thuggishone Said :
Thuggishone It's uplifting, and it brings out true emotions that have been bottled up so long.