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Shining in Her Eyes
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Created on 9-24-08
Moonlight shines across the sea
Far off in a distant land
On the beach is where I be
A little red rose in my hand
Wishing you here with all my heart
Dreaming about our old life
How could you stay so far apart
And leave me, my dearest wife?
Your beauty can never compare, my love
Something I fully realize
The stars now hold you in skies above
With moonlight shining in your eyes
Please Login to post comments| On September 26th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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It's ok not your best. I did have a nice flow to it. :) |
| On September 24th 2008 lyrikaldisastr Said : | |
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not as good as some of ur other ones but still good nonetheless;)...again i like the way u like paint the picture u can picture like a man all heartbroken at the beach about to toss the rose out into the ocean wishing her back...:) |
