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Created on 9-19-08
The melody floats
Inside my head
Chanting, chanting, chanting
Here I lay
Afraid of death
Fading, fading, fading
Blood surrounds me
Soaks me through
Seeping, seeping, seeping
The music fades
Life does, too
Leaving, leaving, leaving,
My death awaits
My eyes flutter
Slipping, slipping, slipping
Never to wake
My heart shutters
Dying, dying, death
Please Login to post comments| On September 20th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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I agree with everything that guy below me said. I actually wish it was longer. But I really don't know what else you could write. |
| On September 19th 2008 lyrikaldisastr Said : | |
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liked it kinda sounds like that i think its edgar ellen poe where he keeps hearing the heart beat under the floor...or w/e poem that is..like the format and the way the words keep like repeating itself in ur head like a chant or thought |
