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Created on 9-18-08
Sitting here doing nothing
My mind slipping away
Dreaming a place I could be
On this boring day
Surrounded by strangers
Talking across the room
Stuck here for an hour
My school-year doom
Please Login to post comments| On September 19th 2008 TheKTGirl Said : | |
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funny you should mention that, Lyrikaldisastr... because I WAS in the school room writing this in my boredom :D |
| On September 19th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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I think it's perfect and does not need to be longer. My school year doom. I know what that is like. Glad I'm not there anymore. |
| On September 18th 2008 lyrikaldisastr Said : | |
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lol...nice u can actually picture the person in school bored writing this in class..couldve been longer..but works perfect the way it is..hits the spot..once again nice structure and i liked the way it flows |
