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A picture in my mind...Rate this Poem
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All you have to do. |
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Children of time. |
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Enigma |
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Last breath before dying. |
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I'm powerless or am I? |
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The Place everyone wants.... |
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Tipsy grins |
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What else could it be? |
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Why is fate so cruel? |
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A warning to be heeded.... |
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What happened to us? |
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When the wind blows. |
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Gossamer wings for one so fragile |
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Life through the eyes of a child |
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Today I am scared... |
Pandora's box? Perhaps.
Dark roiling thunder clouds paint the sky,
Lightning chrashes down detroying all in its path.
Waiting for thunder to declare it's victory.
Blackened stumps protruding from the ground in testimony of the wrath exhaulted here.
Battle between dark and light to see who will win now,
Locked doors line this landscape leading to who knows where,
No buildings for clues,
No other side to these doors.
A landscape littered with with broken bonds,
Ropes ripped assunder before they are ready to be released.
Broken toys and books in shattered shards
For broken childhoods and dreams.
Is it dark water where the monsters reside
Or worse yet is the blood of those who walked before?
Dark and unreflective.
As cruel as destiny at its worst.
Heart beating faster,
You realise the viewer is being viewed.
in the corner is an eye,
Pushing out of the ungiving barren earth.
In this strange place is that good or bad?
Nothing seems to really be as it should here.
Is it illusion?
Or a prediction of the future?
In the distance by a protruding stump is something green
Clawing its way over the wasted landscape.
Growing out of a guilded, wooden chest,
Could this be Pandora's box?
Forgotten and lost
Ripped apart in greed searching for more than there is?
Is all hope lost in a barren place?
Can a door hold an answer, but who holds the key?
Where is she?
The minder of the box and detsiny?
It seems like even hope has ben lost and that scares me,
More than all the monsters you cannot see.
| On July 25th 2008 Dragonwing999 Said : | |
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it's a good poem |
| On March 7th 2008 kellyjob Said : | |
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Love the way you build up the story! Great imagery indeed! Good job! |
| On February 29th 2008 hpriestess Said : | |
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Pandora is a slave to her box, no? It is the illusion of control which unleases her fury upon us. One without hope oft stumbles & falls, ne'er again to get up |
| On February 25th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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all i can say is damn....but that's in a good way. |
| On February 23rd 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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Awesome imagery! Very intense. |
| On February 18th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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Ooo differant and GOOD!!!! keep them comeing girl!!! |


