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Just a few thoughts on my mindRate this Poem
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All you have to do. |
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Children of time. |
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Enigma |
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Last breath before dying. |
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I'm powerless or am I? |
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The Place everyone wants.... |
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Tipsy grins |
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What else could it be? |
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Why is fate so cruel? |
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A warning to be heeded.... |
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What happened to us? |
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When the wind blows. |
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Gossamer wings for one so fragile |
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Life through the eyes of a child |
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Today I am scared... |
At face value
When people look
Do they really see?
The pain, the scars
The things we hide so well.
If someone is beautiful on the outside and loses some aspect of it
Will you still love them just the same?
Will you see the loss their soul suffers?
They say beauty is only skin deep,
But do you really believe it?
Then why won't you talk to the one everyone says is not beautiful?
Beauty in itself can be a curse,
Attracting elements that prey on them
Those that seek to possess that beauty by controlling it.
What of the beast that hides beneath an innocent veneer?
The one who only emerges when no one is looking?
Killing something valuable that cannot be possesed.
When does a child learn to be cruel?
Exactly where is the turning point?
When does the monster start to form and when does it emerge?
When does that sweet baby become that callous person?
When does a heart turn cold and cease to feel?
How can you reconcile yourself if that is your child?
How can a parent hate their child?
Let alone hurt them?
Can we ever be really good parents without hurting our kids one way or another?
Life is scary
and a trip we make mostly alone
others come and go.
So all we have is today!
Right here , right now
Tomerrow never comes and yesterday we cant change.
| On January 17th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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Not to shaby at all Girl, hits hard on some aspects! |
| On January 16th 2008 jjsmomm682006 Said : | |
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this is a very true poem. IT just shows how shallow the world actually is. How are young come to see models and mindless idiots as they're idols instead of those who do good actually in the world. Very beautifully written. Kudos to you. Kudos.
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| On January 16th 2008 NisaNicole Said : | |
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A lot of this is so true...kind of depressing that this isn't the way most people are. Good job though. |
| On January 15th 2008 MrGiggles4sure Said : | |
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i like it its good its got meaning could you do me a favor and look at my poem i just put up i wanna get it heard i think youll likr it |
| On January 15th 2008 TheDragonwitch Said : | |
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Just some random thoughts. let me know what you think please. |


