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Boom I never saw it coming!!

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You called me here

quickly you said i need you

Running I came.

Heart pounding, tears flowing.

I can't lose you!!

 

I'm running not looking for tears cloud my vision.

What will I do without you?

I cannot contemplate my greatest fear.

It was not a call i expected.

 

My darling I'm near,

there has been a terrible accident!

Come quick, I love you !

Know that.

If you don't make it in time I forgive you

but come quick I need you!

 

I hear it, I see you

Mangle of pole and person,

You are alive...

just barely

 

I scream your name, running to be at the side of the one I love.

BOOM!

I'm not running,

but I see you.

What happened?

 

They say I was hit and it broke your dying heart.

We are together now.

So all my fears were for nothing.

We leave no one behind.

No worries or troubles no more.

 

I came running

it cost me my life.

Devotion can have a strange twist.

You kept asking what would have happened had I not run?

 

Not your fault my sweet love

Better together than eternally apart.

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On January 16th 2008 kellyjob Said :
kellyjob Wow! Very intense and sad! I loved it!
On January 13th 2008 XxXkillinMeXxX Said :
XxXkillinMeXxX very beautiful!
On January 10th 2008 ausjo Said :
ausjo Wow...I never saw that twist coming! Excellent job.
On January 7th 2008 Halfpint9135 Said :
Halfpint9135 Beautiful
On January 7th 2008 InvisibleFlame Said :
InvisibleFlame Good ideas!
On January 7th 2008 hottiesmnth25 Said :
hottiesmnth25 nice i like it alot see u have wrote four beautiful poems today an they are all well written i am so thankful to have frineds like u an fallon
On January 7th 2008 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord Let us hope that this never comes to pass.nicely done love!