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What you never see..

Views (218) Tragedy Created on 1-4-08 Flag

Behind that suburban door

Many crimes are committed.

Cruelty and pain

A world they hide well.

 

Eyes that cried and you saw

you walked away

Not my problem, not today!

She saw you and wanted to die.

 

For fear and shame of all her pain

locked behind that door.

Work she may not

Talk NEVER!!

Who would listen or believe ?

 

This goes on year upon year

You shrug and say she should leave.

By now she has kids.

More complexeties you do not see.

 

She cries everyday for help

and you hear her not

either through want or ignorance

I know not what.

 

You call your self caring?

Of what?

Then the day comes,

The day we all knew would.

She is gone and so are the little ones.

 

Where did they go?

For your soul's sake I hope they left!

Because the other idea is gruesome.

And you walked away.

Not me, not today.

 

He need never lifts his hands to be so cruel,

There is more than one way to skin a cat

You can be sure of that.

Hope your heart is clean.

One day you will answer.

 

Both perpatrator, victim and witness.

So who are you and how do you feel?

In this cycle

that hides behind a door and darkness?

 

Just know if you ask

the universe will answer

and your days of hell will be done forever.

 

Just do it now

Before it's too late,

Let not the hand that takes you be his or yours.

 

Perpetrator, victim and witness

Who will it be ?

The one who wins?

Is there really a victory here?

 

Or just a tradgedy of infinate time and space.

Who is it in your life?

Look hard, then decide

Whose life.

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On January 10th 2008 ausjo Said :
ausjo REally well written. I think all too many live this life these days.
On January 6th 2008 DeathMetalPunk Said :
DeathMetalPunk This is so deep, amazing, poetic. This is awesome!
On January 5th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 as i said...on a whole 'nother level.....marvelous ur far too deep for the average reader...reading ur works is akin to a marvelous adventure...a guaranteed good read each time.
On January 5th 2008 kellyjob Said :
kellyjob Wow! It was like reading a story and a poem. It flowed very well! And too true! How many people see a crime and just turn away, thinking they can do nothing to help....Sad world we live in! You are a very good story teller! I liked it!
On January 5th 2008 101091 Said :
101091 Wow. Very well put.
On January 4th 2008 morbidangel585 Said :
morbidangel585 loved how you put this! nice job
On January 4th 2008 transgenic Said :
transgenic Thought provoking, great work!
On January 4th 2008 TheDragonwitch Said :
TheDragonwitch always welcome
On January 4th 2008 hottiesmnth25 Said :
hottiesmnth25 NIX'S THAT IS SO SWEET AN BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN IT IS EVERYTHING I GO THRU ON A DAY TO DAY BASIS AN I AM TIRED OF IT AN THANK U SO MUCH FOR U AN FALLON'S SUPPORT LOVE U GUYS
On January 4th 2008 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord nicly put love!!
On January 4th 2008 TheDragonwitch Said :
TheDragonwitch Think carefully what you see and do, todays actions affect tomorrows destiny