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Look for the captive behind that door...Rate this Poem
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All you have to do. |
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Children of time. |
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Enigma |
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Last breath before dying. |
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I'm powerless or am I? |
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The Place everyone wants.... |
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Tipsy grins |
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What else could it be? |
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Why is fate so cruel? |
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A warning to be heeded.... |
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What happened to us? |
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When the wind blows. |
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Gossamer wings for one so fragile |
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Life through the eyes of a child |
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Today I am scared... |
What you never see..
Behind that suburban door
Many crimes are committed.
Cruelty and pain
A world they hide well.
Eyes that cried and you saw
you walked away
Not my problem, not today!
She saw you and wanted to die.
For fear and shame of all her pain
locked behind that door.
Work she may not
Talk NEVER!!
Who would listen or believe ?
This goes on year upon year
You shrug and say she should leave.
By now she has kids.
More complexeties you do not see.
She cries everyday for help
and you hear her not
either through want or ignorance
I know not what.
You call your self caring?
Of what?
Then the day comes,
The day we all knew would.
She is gone and so are the little ones.
Where did they go?
For your soul's sake I hope they left!
Because the other idea is gruesome.
And you walked away.
Not me, not today.
He need never lifts his hands to be so cruel,
There is more than one way to skin a cat
You can be sure of that.
Hope your heart is clean.
One day you will answer.
Both perpatrator, victim and witness.
So who are you and how do you feel?
In this cycle
that hides behind a door and darkness?
Just know if you ask
the universe will answer
and your days of hell will be done forever.
Just do it now
Before it's too late,
Let not the hand that takes you be his or yours.
Perpetrator, victim and witness
Who will it be ?
The one who wins?
Is there really a victory here?
Or just a tradgedy of infinate time and space.
Who is it in your life?
Look hard, then decide
Whose life.
| On January 10th 2008 ausjo Said : | |
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REally well written. I think all too many live this life these days. |
| On January 6th 2008 DeathMetalPunk Said : | |
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This is so deep, amazing, poetic. This is awesome! |
| On January 5th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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as i said...on a whole 'nother level.....marvelous ur far too deep for the average reader...reading ur works is akin to a marvelous adventure...a guaranteed good read each time. |
| On January 5th 2008 kellyjob Said : | |
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Wow! It was like reading a story and a poem. It flowed very well! And too true! How many people see a crime and just turn away, thinking they can do nothing to help....Sad world we live in! You are a very good story teller! I liked it! |
| On January 5th 2008 101091 Said : | |
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Wow. Very well put. |
| On January 4th 2008 morbidangel585 Said : | |
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loved how you put this! nice job |
| On January 4th 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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Thought provoking, great work! |
| On January 4th 2008 TheDragonwitch Said : | |
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always welcome
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| On January 4th 2008 hottiesmnth25 Said : | |
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NIX'S THAT IS SO SWEET AN BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN IT IS EVERYTHING I GO THRU ON A DAY TO DAY BASIS AN I AM TIRED OF IT AN THANK U SO MUCH FOR U AN FALLON'S SUPPORT LOVE U GUYS |
| On January 4th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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nicly put love!! |
| On January 4th 2008 TheDragonwitch Said : | |
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Think carefully what you see and do, todays actions affect tomorrows destiny |


