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this is so funny to watch.Rate this Poem
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Fighting the inevitable...
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Created on 1-4-08
There he sits upon the couch
rifling his hands through his thick hair
fighting the inevitable.
He will not cede
but pulls his hair gently trying to overcome it
Mouth a gaping "o"
oh how how he wants to win
Head nodding gently
then it whips up and pretends that nothing went awry
his plan is working
windows of wonder wide open!!!
Till plop there he falls
Sound asleep where he sat a minute ago
fighting sleep
like all children we know.
Please Login to post comments| On January 10th 2008 ausjo Said : | |
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lol. That has so been me. What a sweet picture you paint. |
| On January 5th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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that was me last night lol |
| On January 5th 2008 kellyjob Said : | |
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Haha! That's cute! Yeah, all children love to fight that neverending battle:) I remember doing that as a kid also. Never want to miss a moment. Again nicely writen! |
| On January 4th 2008 hottiesmnth25 Said : | |
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that is sweet i like it alot |
| On January 4th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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AWWW that was so cute love, i could picture him actualy fall over sound asleep. |
| On January 4th 2008 TheDragonwitch Said : | |
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He hates to have an afternoon nap and will fight it tooth and nail
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