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Is everything really as it seems?Rate this Poem
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All you have to do. |
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Children of time. |
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Enigma |
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Last breath before dying. |
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I'm powerless or am I? |
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The Place everyone wants.... |
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Tipsy grins |
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What else could it be? |
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Why is fate so cruel? |
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A warning to be heeded.... |
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What happened to us? |
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When the wind blows. |
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Gossamer wings for one so fragile |
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Life through the eyes of a child |
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Today I am scared... |
Last breath before dying.
At the summit of a remarkable rocky outcrop she stands
Senses all alert and straining at the differant inspirations,
tugging at them
Leading them on
motivating her to be even more alert then EVER before.
A cooling breeze plays through her hair
Pushing her forward and ever onwards.
Moonlight casting down upon an angel.
Waiting for what?
Perfection, gratitude, grace?
Listen to the moist breeze as it whispers in the grass
Almost like the lullaby your mother hummed to you,
when you were small.
Comforting and cosy, but a tiny bit sad about what is gone forever.
Her eyes cannot believe the beauty before her in this vast land.
Moonlight pouring down, boundless and free,
Changing everything to seem more beautiful and gracefull
than it ever seemed before.
Magic is in the air with the stars
The wind and the moon joined by an angel just waiting.
Standing beautifully still in this landscape she calls her own.
The breeze tugs at her once more
Whispering sweetly to her one last time to join it ,
as it fly's in freedom and grace.
Standing on tip-toe almost trying to reach the sky,
This angel spreads her wings out as far as they can reach this night...
and jumps.
Gracefully plummeting down the mountinside
her body plummeting endlessly,
but her spirit is soaring!!
She inhales her last, sweet, exhilirating breath
filling her lungs till they almost burst.
In a strange way part of her has died all ready
and she is free.
As the end draws closer,
She holds her last precious, sweet breath.
Hoping to preserve something of it's beauty
and charm within her forever.
Her last precious breath that plummeted with her
Never leaving it's mistresses side.
Finally it is over.
She spreads her wings above her head..
As she dives gracefully into that bottomless pool of cool, serenity
and aqua blue water.
Dazzling as moonlight plays upon its surface.
Below it surface in the deep and dark
the angel still dives, deeper and deeper
In her sleek, gracefull state of ultimate beauty.
At last the water ripples ,
Small rings growing larger
Then she surfaces,
For the most precious breath of all.
Life,
A breath of freedom, happiness
and an ultimate celebration of life via death.
For just one fleeting moment,
Hers alone.
She will never forget waiting to dive off an endless outcrop
to a dazzling pool of freedom down below.
The true value of one last breath before "dying".
| On January 21st 2008 showmeboobsbit Said : | |
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just like a turd clinging to the porceline before being flushed away, very moving :) |
| On January 9th 2008 blahidyblah929 Said : | |
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i cant get over how much this poem speaks to me. i know that sounds kind of lame, but it's amazing. |
| On January 8th 2008 Daemion Said : | |
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wow... this is good... rather misleading though XD... lol it sounds quite like a cliff diving suicide for a while... lol |
| On December 8th 2007 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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ur stuff is on a whole 'nother level...i almost feel neolithic trying to comprehend ur skill. great writing. |
| On December 3rd 2007 hottiesmnth25 Said : | |
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beautiful i thought it was gonna end with death but it did not i love the ending i want to be able to write like this one day |
| On November 2nd 2007 101091 Said : | |
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I loved it. It is so beautifully written. You had me for a moment thinking it was going to end with suicide and I was like NOOOOOO! It's to pretty to end that way. Great job. It reminded me of a trip I took to the mountians a long time ago. Beautiful job on painting this picture. |
| On November 1st 2007 13Peace Said : | |
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You really put yourself in (or out) there--I luv it! |
| On November 1st 2007 Halfpint9135 Said : | |
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this is beautiful, i love the ending |
| On November 1st 2007 countryfreak13 Said : | |
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Awesome job! I like this one! One of my favorites! :) |
| On November 1st 2007 mydragonlord Said : | |
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beautiful, you had me there for a moment. well done. |
| On November 1st 2007 ausjo Said : | |
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You have a lovely way of expressing yourself through writing. I really like your style. Keep it up! |
| On November 1st 2007 TheDragonwitch Said : | |
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Please let me know what you think and if you want to rate it....Got you though. |


