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Last breath before dying.

Views (212) Joy Created on 11-1-07 Flag

At the summit of a remarkable rocky outcrop she stands

Senses all alert and straining at the differant inspirations,

tugging at them

Leading them on

motivating her to be even more alert then EVER before.

 

A cooling breeze plays through her hair

Pushing her forward and ever onwards.

Moonlight casting down upon an angel.

Waiting for what?

Perfection, gratitude, grace?

 

Listen to the moist breeze as it whispers in the grass

Almost like the lullaby your mother hummed to you,

when you were small.

Comforting and cosy, but a tiny bit sad about what is gone forever.

Her eyes cannot believe the beauty before her in this vast land.

 

Moonlight pouring down, boundless and free,

Changing everything to seem more beautiful and gracefull

than it ever seemed before.

 

Magic is in the air with the stars

The wind and the moon joined by an angel just waiting.

Standing beautifully still in this landscape she calls her own.

 

The breeze tugs at her once more

Whispering sweetly to her one last time to join it ,

as it fly's in freedom and grace.

 

Standing on tip-toe almost trying to reach the sky,

This angel spreads her wings out as far as they can reach this night...

and jumps.

 

Gracefully plummeting down the mountinside

her body plummeting endlessly,

but her spirit is soaring!!

She inhales her last, sweet, exhilirating breath

filling her lungs till they almost burst.

In a strange way part of her has died all ready

and she is free.

 

As the end draws closer,

She holds her last precious, sweet breath.

Hoping to preserve something of it's beauty

and charm within her forever.

Her last precious breath that plummeted with her

Never leaving it's mistresses side.

 

Finally it is over.

She spreads her wings above her head..

As she dives gracefully into that bottomless pool of cool, serenity

and aqua blue water.

 

Dazzling as moonlight plays upon its surface.

Below it surface in the deep and dark

the angel still dives, deeper and deeper

In her sleek, gracefull state of ultimate beauty.

 

At last the water ripples ,

Small rings growing larger

Then she surfaces,

For the most precious breath of all.

 

Life,

A breath of freedom, happiness

and an ultimate celebration of life via death.

 For just one fleeting moment,

Hers alone.

 

She will never forget waiting to dive off an endless outcrop

to a dazzling pool of freedom down below.

The true value of one last breath before "dying".

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On January 21st 2008 showmeboobsbit Said :
my picture
just like a turd clinging to the porceline before being flushed away, very moving :)
On January 9th 2008 blahidyblah929 Said :
blahidyblah929 i cant get over how much this poem speaks to me. i know that sounds kind of lame, but it's amazing.
On January 8th 2008 Daemion Said :
Daemion wow... this is good... rather misleading though XD... lol it sounds quite like a cliff diving suicide for a while... lol
On December 8th 2007 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 ur stuff is on a whole 'nother level...i almost feel neolithic trying to comprehend ur skill. great writing.
On December 3rd 2007 hottiesmnth25 Said :
hottiesmnth25 beautiful i thought it was gonna end with death but it did not i love the ending i want to be able to write like this one day
On November 2nd 2007 101091 Said :
101091 I loved it. It is so beautifully written. You had me for a moment thinking it was going to end with suicide and I was like NOOOOOO! It's to pretty to end that way. Great job. It reminded me of a trip I took to the mountians a long time ago. Beautiful job on painting this picture.
On November 1st 2007 13Peace Said :
13Peace You really put yourself in (or out) there--I luv it!
On November 1st 2007 Halfpint9135 Said :
Halfpint9135 this is beautiful, i love the ending
On November 1st 2007 countryfreak13 Said :
countryfreak13 Awesome job! I like this one! One of my favorites! :)
On November 1st 2007 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord beautiful, you had me there for a moment. well done.
On November 1st 2007 ausjo Said :
ausjo You have a lovely way of expressing yourself through writing. I really like your style. Keep it up!
On November 1st 2007 TheDragonwitch Said :
TheDragonwitch Please let me know what you think and if you want to rate it....Got you though.