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All you have to do.

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My time is short

My time is precious

There is no time for being malicious.

 

You love through me

I love through thee

All you need to do is trust in me.

 

My love is true

My love is thine

Therefore will thy love be mine?

 

You love me now

You'll love me later

Only your love will be my container.

 

Forever should you love me true

Never let my heart be blue

And I will always love and trust in you.

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On March 3rd 2008 JosephGaris Said :
JosephGaris this poem touched me in the heart. you not only created a poem, you created a piece of art.
On January 16th 2008 NisaNicole Said :
NisaNicole Very sweet, reminded me of Romeo & Juliet when you said "thy" lol. I likee. ♥
On January 9th 2008 blahidyblah929 Said :
blahidyblah929 beautiful. i love the language you used.
On December 3rd 2007 hottiesmnth25 Said :
hottiesmnth25 this poem is beautiful i love it you wrote it oh so well i love you an your husbands work i have be kept up with his work so would u please keep me up with yours
On November 2nd 2007 101091 Said :
101091 I love it. The line, "Only your love will be my container," really hit home for me. It made it sound like their love is the only thin holding you together. This is so beautifully written. Great job.
On November 1st 2007 countryfreak13 Said :
countryfreak13 This is gorgous! Better yet... B.E.A.UTIFUL! Awesome job on this one!! :)
On October 31st 2007 jjsmomm682006 Said :
jjsmomm682006 its beautiful, heartfelt and warm. very nice.
On October 31st 2007 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord nice my angel, please keep them coming. i konw all you have will be welkomed and enjoyed by all.
On October 30th 2007 ausjo Said :
ausjo "Only your love will be my container." That line completely changed the tone of the poem. Very good indeed.