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i wrote this for my girlfriend Melissa

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Views (227) Love Created on 3-10-08 Flag
I can't explain this feeling,
this feeling I have towards you,
but I gotta let it out.
I really wanna say it,
but I dont know how you'll take it.
cause it may be too soon,
but I gotta let you know.
how i really feel about you.
everytime I see you,
my heart skips a beat,
and everytime I hear your voice,
I can barely speak.
and everytime I think about you,
I cant help but smile,
about everything I love about you.
I've got something on my mind,
what i really want to say is,
I really really love,
you.
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On April 13th 2008 Takacs76 Said :
Takacs76 ok, i know this is gonna make me look really stupid when it comes to relationships, but how bad would it be if i gave this poem to my current gf when i wrote it while i was with my ex?
On March 12th 2008 betyoucantgess Said :
betyoucantgess aww!
i love this
and haha my name is melissa
On March 11th 2008 Takacs76 Said :
Takacs76 well, melissa broke up with me before i got to read her this poem, so i wrote it for nothing
On March 10th 2008 NJMom32106 Said :
NJMom32106 Very sweet
On March 10th 2008 Takacs76 Said :
Takacs76 thanks for all the support. belive it or not, this is the first love poem i've ever written
On March 10th 2008 hayleyswiger14 Said :
hayleyswiger14 i love it this girl is very lucky...:)
On March 10th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said :
EvilRaven9892 What i think is that if this is true read this poem to her. Corney idea I know but I think that this poem is very sweet!
On March 10th 2008 crazygirl2313 Said :
crazygirl2313 awwwwww
On March 10th 2008 PeterSteeleYum Said :
PeterSteeleYum Very sweet. [:
On March 10th 2008 absenceofnothi Said :
absenceofnothi sry about the multi posts inet messed up :*(
On March 10th 2008 absenceofnothi Said :
absenceofnothi I liked it because i fell the same way about this girl you feel about yours and i did the same thing and wrote her a poem because its hard to speak what your heart has to say and its way easier to let someone read what your heart had to say. Holla -(AoN)-
On March 10th 2008 absenceofnothi Said :
absenceofnothi I liked it because i fell the same way about this girl you feel about yours and i did the same thing and wrote her a poem because its hard to speak what your heart has to say and its way easier to let someone read what your heart had to say. Holla -(AoN)-
On March 10th 2008 absenceofnothi Said :
absenceofnothi I liked it because i fell the same way about this girl you feel about yours and i did the same thing and wrote her a poem because its hard to speak what your heart has to say and its way easier to let someone read what your heart had to say. Holla -(AoN)-
On March 10th 2008 oceanbluebook Said :
oceanbluebook this is good.. i really like it..i bet she will too/hey check out my new poem?? and tell me what you think if you have time? its kinda like this one.. hav a good one:)
On March 10th 2008 Takacs76 Said :
Takacs76 please let me know what u think