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As I Lay Here, I Dream
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Created on 7-20-07
As i lay here
I dream
About life
And what it means
Am I really meant to be here
Will I be a good leader
As I lay here
I dream
About love
And what it means
Why do I love him so much
Why do I love to feel your touch
As I lay here
I dream
About friendship
And what it means
To feel befriended and then tricked
And in your heart lies a painful prick
As I lay here I dream
About the world
And what it means
Why can't we live in peace
Why does everyone have to be enemies
Please Login to post comments| On July 25th 2007 judy11111 Said : | |
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omg i love it!!!!!XD |
| On July 21st 2007 browneyes33 Said : | |
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nice Job!! |
| On July 21st 2007 browneyes33 Said : | |
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I can tell this is from your heart. Keep writing what you feel and you can't go wrong |
| On July 21st 2007 angeleyes62580 Said : | |
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I think its very good! I often think about what the world means!!! |
