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Some of the many words that describe meRate this Poem
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How Much I Love You |
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Just Some Girl |
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As I Lay Here, I Dream |
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I Am So Tired |
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Happiness |
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What Is It That I Fear |
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So Alone |
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Daydream |
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I Thought I'd Forgotten You |
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Long time, no see |
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Reflection |
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Past and Future |
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You have a problem |
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I hate you |
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To be..words
Hated
Angry
Moody
Emotional
To be hated is to have no friends.
To be angry is to not be happy.
To be moody is to have different emotions.
To be emotional is to get hurt a lot.
Wierd
Alone
Embarrased
Trapped
To be wierd is to not be normal.
To be alone is to be with no one.
To be embarrassed is to do by accident.
To be trapped is to always be deep in memories and thoughts.
Loved
Frendly
Helpful
Average
To be loved is to not be hated.
To have friendly is to not be hateful.
To be helpful is to not be harmful.
To be average is to not be wierd.
Content
Nice
Smart
Trustworthy
To be Content is to be alright.
To be Nice is to not be mean.
To be smart is to not be dumb.
To be trustworthy is to be trusted.
Dumb
Mean
Ugly
Fearful
To be dumb is to not be smart.
To be mean is to not be nice.
To be ugly is to not be pretty.
To be fearful is to not have courage.
Jealous
Jumpy
Tired
Forgetful
To be jealous is to want to be something other than you.
To be jumpy is to not like certain surroundings.
To be tired is to not be restless.
To be forgetful is to forget things.
| On October 28th 2007 charissa14 Said : | |
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its very straight forward...i like it |
| On August 23rd 2007 angeleyes62580 Said : | |
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nice work...I thought it was very good and expressive |
| On August 20th 2007 PoeticPang Said : | |
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"wierd=weird"////,,, ohhh,,, these are fun to do,, but u could do with better memories instead of all these,, ehm, upsetting thoughts?....(a few sweet ones--tho leads to terribleness,, urgh -_-)----- lighten up! ^__^... anywhooo,, good descriptions and flowing explainations?... altho not al lof them are true,, certainly things are unexpected,,,, u shouldn't expect so little of all the nice things that come to u,, but don't expect too much from all the sad things either..............i'd like to read something happy or atleast optimistic from you,,, tis sad that all teenagers seem to phase in and out of the depression and misunderstood times,, but i guess,, if they'd focus more on all the good times instead of the unlucky moments,, then they'd mature and find themselves much better with a smile on their face... true smile,, non-fake...yeah?....... sorry to ramble on with my thoughts(advice?)... i should shut up now,, ^x^~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Pang |
| On August 19th 2007 TorieAnime Said : | |
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i like this 1:) |


