SuperLoserSuzy

My first poem. Obviously it doesnt rhyme

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You Tell Me.

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Created on 7-9-07

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How should I know what others are thinking,

When I don't even know what I'm thinking?

How do I know how others feel,

If I'm not even sure if I feel at all?

Where should I go,

When I'm lost and clueless?

What can I do,

If I'm always forced?

Why am I here,

If I dont know what I'm doing?

Why do people tell me they love me,

When all I feel is pain?

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On August 16th 2007 SuperLoserSuzy Said :

	Wow. thanks. thats totally true! thank you!!

On August 16th 2007 cloud132475860 Said :

	Well you have stumbled on to the many cruelties of life and each has its own awnser but no one can tell you the awnser u must figure them for yourself because each question for each person is different due to the relavence of the senario

On August 8th 2007 SuperLoserSuzy Said :

	Tehe.

On August 7th 2007 numbbbb0z Said :

	That's the beautiful thing of life, madam. =)

On July 12th 2007 SuperLoserSuzy Said :

	Thanks Sarah! YAY! ^_^

On July 11th 2007 NII Said :

	i like this one.. i know i already commented it on your blog.. but i just really like this one

On July 10th 2007 SuperLoserSuzy Said :

	Aww...Thank you so much! It means a lot to me that you like it!! It is my first poem! Thanks A Lot!!!

On July 9th 2007 numbbbb0z Said :

	Wow. You can REALLY tell I like this poem XD - and I do! Because I are answering your questions (which you may not want) :P Sorry. Good poem. I can really relate to it :) - I hope all the pain you have dissappears one day :(

On July 9th 2007 numbbbb0z Said :

	And I like this :) I wish I could answer your questions..obviously the title fits with this. But you know you feel 'cause you're in pain, the fact you wonder about what you're thinking about shows your thoughts. What's wrong with staying put 'till you know how to be found? Take a stand! Take a stand! One can never really know what they are doing, it's always best to assume the best.

On July 9th 2007 numbbbb0z Said :

	Not everything needs to rhyme :P