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internal rivalry between head and heart!

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Head vs. Heart

Views (55) Love Created on 9-9-07 Flag
Can this be love?
Can't be. You bearly know the guy.
But then again, you feel like you've known him forever.
His eyes are so deep and passionate,
you just want to dive right in
and swim around in the depths of his soul forever.
The way he speaks tells you that his heart is and open book,
or perhaps an open wound.
Will you be the one to bandage his heart,
and turn his sorrowful passion into beautiful and thriving love?
Where did this feeling come from?
Can this be love?
Well, there's only one way to find out...
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On April 1st 2008 quietturtle Said :
quietturtle You know this kinda made me think of Joanna.:)
On December 22nd 2007 spiduhhxxfunk Said :
spiduhhxxfunk i love this one and that girl with the comments is bothering me she keeps correcting you come on you can't get anymore perfect than you already are :D hahaha
On December 3rd 2007 ALICHELLA16 Said :
ALICHELLA16 you your chintzey poem at the bottom ruins it for me lmfao and wtf is with all the correcting? and the commas lol
On September 12th 2007 ALICHELLA16 Said :
ALICHELLA16 LMFAO JON LEE? not laughing at ur poem im jsut laughign i dun know why... chillen this weekend>?
On September 11th 2007 PoeticPang Said :
PoeticPang "barely",, (lol,, bearly means,, well,, a bear,, with ly,, lol,, )... *sigh*,,, tis somewhat love,,, close,, idk,,, idk?... it's hard to say,,, these things come ,, these feelings go,, ,,, anywho,,, great lines,, really shows ur thoughts,,, ,,, i love the questions at the end,,, personally understandable,,, intimately misunderstood.... and yes,, just give it a shot and try,,, who knows?.... i don't,, lol,, ^___^ great poem!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Pang
On September 9th 2007 SpiffyKnickers Said :
SpiffyKnickers My heart speaks true!
but then again... my head has a point too...
Oh what to do!!!