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Created:
01/02 2008
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222
Category:
Pain
My Poems
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What's It All About |
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13
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Foolish Love |
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Addictive Lips |
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Such a racist world |
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Unwanted |
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The Last Time |
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13
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Lonely |
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7
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Blinding Love |
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5
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Daggers to the Heart |
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scars of love |
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broken womb |
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14
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Ashamed to Love a Loser |
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Pain doesn't control me anymore |
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Flight 175 |
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Screaming for Help |
Pain doesn't control me anymore
So many scars
Come with many tears
So much pain
Through all of this year
The blade goes deeper
With each time I cry
I just can't help it
I don't know why
The feeling is good
The pain is not there
The knife is sharp
Why should I care
No one sees it
As if they were blind
Each time I do it
They don't even mind
I carve and slice
Just missing the vein
It's my life
I control my pain
Please Login to post comments| On January 10th 2008 seekerovtruth Said: |
| Perhaps writing can be a way to vent those emotions w/o being self destructive. Great piece. Writing has helped me immensely to get things out w/o resorting to self destruction. :) |
| On January 2nd 2008 emily28793 Said: |
| this is like an awsumness poem..... and i can relate.... |
| On January 2nd 2008 DemonzR4eva Said: |
| i know how this poem is...because i do the same thing, except i dont control the pain the razorblade does....ohhh man it feels really good...it relaxes me a lot and i dont consider it being harmful to anyone not even myself because it helps so how can something so helpful be dangerous..
PEACE!!!!! |
| On January 2nd 2008 transgenic Said: |
| This is very emotional...Great work! |
| On January 2nd 2008 tattooloves269 Said: |
| i realy loved your poem it hits realy close to home,i cary alot of scare's of life on my arm,i have cut more time than i care to remember...so now insted of a razzorblade i hold my tattoo gun is still release's the pain inside but it looks alot better..lol....good luck in your life and keep on wrighting you have a lot of talent...i wish you the best in life and keep your head up :) |
