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I wrote this when my mom left

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Lonely

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When you left it broke my heart

You left during the night while it was still dark

When I woke up I couldn't find you

I looked all over but I had no clue

Once I found out I couldn't stop crying

It hurt so bad as if I was dying

I was partially dying deep down inside

It was as if you went away to hide

Why would you hide from me did I do something wrong

I love you very much and here is where you belong

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On May 9th 2008 alday4 Said :
alday4 awwwwww sadness!!!
On December 18th 2007 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 Only a coward leaves under cover of night...very good
On November 4th 2007 morbidangel585 Said :
morbidangel585 aww thats sad =[ love the poem tho
On August 1st 2007 bethm300 Said :
bethm300 very sad but its very good!