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*shrugs*, I got nothing :P

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Created: 03/19 2009
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Category: Pain

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Sailing
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Endless Path
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Sin
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Division
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Darkness and Cold

This Sinking Feeling

So angels dance upon broken ground
as the sun sets gently over the hill.
And here I sit, making no sound
for I hoped and now that hope is still.

Too eagerly I put myself forth,
too great were my expectations.
And now as the winds blow north
I croon my lamentations.

They were silly, I know, the dreams I had
but it's not easy to keep hope at bay.
And though now I am a little sad,
I know that tomorrow is a new day.

So I will sit and watch the angels sing,
bearing in mind all that I think
And attempt to share the joy they bring,
While slowly, slowly, I let my hope sink.

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On March 20th 2009 blindfaeth Said: 
blindfaeth "I croon my lamentations" I'm very impressed. ^^b (thumbs up)
On March 19th 2009 roseling Said: 
roseling wow i love it great job its really good keep up the good work
On March 19th 2009 JWalker2406 Said: 
JWalker2406 Aww, that was great. Awesome choice of words :)