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It's coming
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Created on 5-14-08
Gently it creeps
through the door.
Silently you weep,
you can take no more.
Emboldened now
it walks in tall.
After that row,
there is only a wall.
Straight towards you
with menacing grace.
What can you do?
What will you face?
Smothering you with
great big arms.
You sniff
and Unhappiness charms.
Please Login to post comments| On July 20th 2008 justjetjustis Said : | |
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nice ^^ |
| On May 18th 2008 max5892 Said : | |
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i like it! awsome job...and sorry i havnt been on for a while! |
| On May 16th 2008 tece26 Said : | |
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I agree simple but moving. Well done |
| On May 14th 2008 JWalker2406 Said : | |
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I like it! Simple and powerful at the same time. :D Great job!! |
| On May 14th 2008 TidalNight Said : | |
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Great job. It flows very well. |
| On May 14th 2008 stubishead Said : | |
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i think it's great ! simple . yet hidden and powerful . |
| On May 14th 2008 orangefizzpop Said : | |
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I love that last line, it made me smile (though wryly as that smile may be). Great job! :) |
| On May 14th 2008 Smarties4 Said : | |
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Something I'm doing for school so tell me what you think :P |
