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No. 14 |
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Alone |
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Confusion |
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Dreams |
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Sorrow |
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The River |
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Sailing |
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Endless Path |
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Sin |
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To wait |
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Questioning |
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Be Careful |
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Running blind |
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Division |
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Darkness and Cold |
Running blind
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Created on 8-6-07
Left, right,
Forwards or backwards?
Where to go,
When to go?
Onwards and upwards they say,
But how,
When you don’t know,
Which is on and which is up?
Slipping,
Sliding.
Running on,
Running blind.
Please Login to post comments| On January 2nd 2008 valerie1414 Said : | |
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i like this poem. maybe you can make a running blind 2. and keep going on with it. |
| On August 8th 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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I like this one..It's really fast paced-the one word lines really give a feel to the confusion~ |
