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my depression runs deeper than 1 week.

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The Depression Way I think

Views (363) Pain Created on 11-8-07 Flag
I thought I could just pass.
When I met them in class.
But I did need them.
Just like a ring needs a gem.
But they didn't care about me.
Lying on the dirt road is all they see.
They never consider my feelings.
My heart needs real bad healing.
I'm starting to cut myself to enjoy the pain.
I feel like I am cuffed to chains.
Kazoua, Allison, Teresa, Anida.
I want to say see ya.
Before I die I have something I want to do.
I just wanted to say I hate all so you.
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If I could only die.
Then I need not cry.
These sad flowing tears of pain.
The only things that keep me sane.
My sanity will not last much longer.
I think I will never become stronger.
My life is pitch black.
On day I will just crack.
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When they say there's no escape.
I left with many scrapes.
I knew there was one way out.
But I knew that I couldnt use that route.
I knew I was born to die.
So here I am right by the sky.
Just waiting to jump.
Now all I am is a bump.
On the road.
Now I am in my death mode
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When they say they need me.
I think I have the best friends I could see.
But after they turn their backs.
All their love just lacks.
I know I might sound whiny.
Even if my significance is tiny.
But I need to know.
If my friends really love me so.
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On November 23rd 2007 xxxAngelicaxxx Said :
xxxAngelicaxxx very emotional. ur words are strong. very good for being so young
On November 10th 2007 chocohott Said :
chocohott omgsh! so sad but i absolutely love it!! theres so much emotion, i felt like i could be living it.
On November 10th 2007 chocohott Said :
chocohott omgsh! so sad but i absolutely love it!! theres so much emotion, i felt like i could be living it.
On November 10th 2007 chocohott Said :
chocohott omgsh! so sad but i absolutely love it!! theres so much emotion, i felt like i could be living it.
On November 10th 2007 emily28793 Said :
emily28793 awsum poem i luv it
On November 10th 2007 ALIESAM21 Said :
ALIESAM21 wow, that was an amzing poem! please check out mine, i have been cutting for seven years, i tried suicide once! only once!
On November 9th 2007 jjsmomm682006 Said :
jjsmomm682006 gorgeous sug. just keep following your dreams and don't care about what others think of you
On November 9th 2007 dragon0trove Said :
dragon0trove WOW! THat was....GOD I'M SPEECHLESS!!!! You wrote this when you're 11?! Geez! you should consider publishing ya'know?
On November 9th 2007 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord Sweetheart, your work is good xspecialy for your age, please keep me informed when you post new poems would love to follow your groth.
On November 9th 2007 hpriestess Said :
hpriestess Minus a few grammar/spelling mistakes it is very good. Well done!
On November 9th 2007 Aleera00 Said :
Aleera00 It's pretty good, I wrote a few of my poems such as Alone and Eternal Slumber when I was about 10 or 11, I think they are also probably the most depressed sounding ones as well, I used to be really depressed but I'm getting better since I changed schools and started living with my dad. Anyway good poem.
On November 8th 2007 tearra14 Said :
tearra14 im 11 too and i totally agree with this girl
On November 8th 2007 California1516 Said :
California1516 wow amazingggggggg
On November 8th 2007 assumetheworst Said :
assumetheworst this is awsome i love it ^__^
On November 8th 2007 morbidangel585 Said :
morbidangel585 thats really good. especially since you're only 11. you'll be a great writer as you keep goin =]
On November 8th 2007 ThisIsTheDay Said :
ThisIsTheDay This is pretty good for an 11 year old, and I'm very sorry that you have to feel that way so young. I began self-mutilating in 4th grade... this is good. Just a few more revisions...I don't really get the first stanza, but ohz wellz. ^_^ Oh yesh-you have aweshum taste. Me
On November 8th 2007 countryfreak13 Said :
countryfreak13 WoW! Neato! I like this a lot! My brother is your age and he can think of a first line for a poem... this is amazing. I really love it! Thanks 4 letting me know about this! You can check out my poems to if u like! :D Keep me posted!
On November 8th 2007 kelkel234 Said :
kelkel234 I am serously being nice here. I love it...you can rhyme wayyyyy better then I can lol. I love this poem alot. Its rlly good for a 11 year old.
On November 8th 2007 transgenic Said :
transgenic Oh, I totally love this! Awesome word choice! Lots of emotion!
On November 8th 2007 SmartAzngirl Said :
SmartAzngirl Please be nice. Im only 11.