SmartAzngirl

depression strikes an 11 year old

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Created on 11-1-07

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I have alot of pain in my life. So Thank You!

Why do I want everyone see.

The Bloody tears that fall from me.

It rolls and drips right off my skin.

Not absorbing the pain I'm in.

The razor cuts oh so deep.

I think I'll save it for a bloody keep.

I want some comfort op no find.

Not anywhere in this bloody kind.

This is as true as life.

Although life may just be a strife.

It's painful to write this down.

Cause no one will listen to my voice's sound.

Why is it her they see?

That also worth loving is me.

I hear everyone's laughing,

Or screaming with joy.'

But that just ache's my heart and tosses it like a toy.

My feelings are as fragile as glass.

Maybe that's why I wish I was dead in a flash.

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On January 1st 2008 Stormece Said :

	I love it. It taps into something meaningful, and needs to be recognized.

On November 10th 2007 ALIESAM21 Said :

	i like it, "why do i want everyone to see, the bloody tears that fall from me!" i love that part!

On November 8th 2007 kelkel234 Said :

	That is rlly deep. I hope writing about ur pain helps u in the same way it helped me. I love it all u have talent considering ur age and I'm 15 and I stink @ rhyming like I said before lol. SO check some of my poems out if ya like.

On November 5th 2007 EvilRaven9892 Said :

	wow to know someone as young as you to have this pain is sad.

On November 2nd 2007 xoxdanicaxox Said :

	this is a really good poem and i know how you feel

On November 2nd 2007 Xpoetxgurlx Said :

	this is deep. beautiful in its own way.....yet scary. but its all good. =] (talk about extreme contradicting myself =P )