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Created:
10/11 2008
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369
Category:
Love
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Daddy? |
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Hiding In Your Eyes |
Daddy?
Can't you see my cry when you throw me around?
Can't you see my face when I hit the ground?
Can't you hear me scream when your fist hits the wall?
Can't you see me scared when you stand up tall?
Can't you see i'm truely fightened
Standing there, angry smile, fist tightened.
Evil stare
You serioulsy don't care?
I'm your little girl.
Yet seem to be alone in this world.
"Come on daddy" I plea
"Can't you see your hurting me?
Please Login to post comments| On September 18th 2009 Laishahriver Said: |
| that's amazing :*( |
| On March 30th 2009 MCRsLover Said: |
| this is soso sad! great poem! |
| On March 17th 2009 audica Said: |
| othis is great. its short, yet, its powerful. great job. |
| On March 9th 2009 LNforever Said: |
| awwww, thats really sad, yet freakin good. |
| On November 21st 2008 jetblack247 Said: |
| Friggin awesome but very sad at the same time.. |
| On November 18th 2008 XXFictitiousXX Said: |
| fuck why is it the pain that also gives birth to such great writing... this is so similar to someone i knw... its as if ya speakin the words she cant... this is one of the best things i've read tonight by far... mean that... no complex poetic words... its straight to the point yet still retaining creativity... COOKIE CUTTER FRESH ::D... ps must you stay with ya father? |
| On October 31st 2008 flipitout Said: |
| sad and great. |
| On October 12th 2008 ShauniKimberli Said: |
| Thank you (: Inpired by my own father :D |
| On October 11th 2008 breepers Said: |
| Very sad,but great poem |
| On October 11th 2008 lolo456456456 Said: |
| awwwwww omg thats sooo sad yet sooo good |
| On October 11th 2008 ashleyluvzjuan Said: |
| that is very sad :[!! |
