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Hell On Earth
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Created on 3-16-07
I look down, into hell's gate,
I see myself, and fear my fate.
fall to my knees and want to break down,
can't quite cry, so I only frown..
I feel the demons crawl around,
seeing people drop to the ground.
I look about and wonder why
the skyscrapers, bury the sky..
I can't see any stars
but drunks in bars..
and then I think..
how much Earth stinks.
the Earth is dying, it ain't well,
I guess I'm already inside Hell.
I see myself, and fear my fate.
fall to my knees and want to break down,
can't quite cry, so I only frown..
I feel the demons crawl around,
seeing people drop to the ground.
I look about and wonder why
the skyscrapers, bury the sky..
I can't see any stars
but drunks in bars..
and then I think..
how much Earth stinks.
the Earth is dying, it ain't well,
I guess I'm already inside Hell.
Please Login to post comments| On October 31st 2007 lala2463 Said : | |
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I agree fully and unconditionally with this poem. I, love your word flow quite a bit, keep it up. |
| On May 18th 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said : | |
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wow that's amazing |
| On March 27th 2007 chickenbroth Said : | |
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Very nicely done, and true in a sense! I love the way that you put your heart into your work! |
