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Created on 2-10-07
I could tell you I love you, but it wouldn't be the same.
I could kiss you and hug you, but it just wouldn't compare.
Without me you're nothing, without him you're less.
Without you I'm fine, without her I'm best.
You can't stop thinking about him, but I'm over her.
You can't get over, what was never sure.
I could kiss you and hug you, but it just wouldn't compare.
Without me you're nothing, without him you're less.
Without you I'm fine, without her I'm best.
You can't stop thinking about him, but I'm over her.
You can't get over, what was never sure.
Please Login to post comments| On May 30th 2007 brokenwing3 Said : | |
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Very good, only thing is that same and compare don't rhyme however it is a tough spot...it would be hard to find a syn for "compare" that rhymes with "same". |
| On May 18th 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said : | |
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you're a great writer |
| On February 10th 2007 ShadowXall Said : | |
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I hope my record holds to x/x :P |
| On February 10th 2007 londonchick50 Said : | |
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Awesome! i have liked 3/3 so far lol! Love it and yeah "Relationships... Jeez" |
