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Dedicated to.. all my Ex-Girlfriends..

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Red Night

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And as the sun sets down, below the dusky horizon,
She looks on with a frown, those hidden feelings risin'
From the depth of her being, buried long long ago..
Before her heart began fleeing, when sadness would grow.
What the hell was she thinking, falling for him..?
Because now she's sinking, and indulging in sin.
When did this take place, this self-destructive change,
Was it when with haste, he left, acting strange?
Did he think she'd never know, what was happening?
Did he think he could just go, leave her running?
But no, this is how it goes, when he hurts her,
When finally she knows, that he's hurt her..
She sets out with vengeance, resting on her lips.
She goes on with weapons, resting on her hips.
He looks so surprised, but he should have known..
That messing with her, would get him dethroned.
But now it's okay, and he's bleeding to death..
But she doesn't know.. did she do what was best..?
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On April 14th 2008 gusty13 Said :
gusty13 this is good
On March 13th 2008 LostSoul1121 Said :
LostSoul1121 heh i like this xD