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Departed
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Created on 6-24-07
Waking up to another dreadful day Depression is in the air & silence everywhere My days are numbered, time is passing me by I’m here waiting helplessly for someone to save my life Not knowing if this will be the day my the journey is coming to an end I sit here alone and afraid Inevitable to deny my heart will eventually stop Everyday I’m trying to survive wishing and hoping aren’t helping me much Fighting against all odds will be just a waste of time I stopped believing, faith is no good Sooner or later I know I’ll die… |
Please Login to post comments| On July 31st 2008 UnSane420 Said : | |
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wow this is awesome i like the flow of it everything fits together so perfectly its awesome! |
| On May 2nd 2008 deshanna13 Said : | |
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this is just good!!! |
| On February 25th 2008 ReneakaKC Said : | |
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thx! |
| On February 24th 2008 hirschey11 Said : | |
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i like this one too! its sad but true...i like it |
| On February 23rd 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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**true |
| On February 23rd 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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So try yet again this was brilliant |
| On December 28th 2007 ALICHELLA16 Said : | |
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i like it |
| On December 16th 2007 CiaraNUMBA4 Said : | |
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nice poem i rrly like your writing! it's very poetic..lol.duh.
well i think it's very good!! |
| On June 28th 2007 ReneakaKC Said : | |
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HEY people please comment regardless if it's complementing or just giving me advice... please and thanks |
