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Someone Else

Views (78) Pain Created on 6-19-08 Flag

Every now and then
I feel like it’s only a dream
That all this love is fake
I feel like it was over
Before it started
I look into your eyes
And I don’t see the sparkle
That was there before
When you hug me and close your eyes
I know someone else is on your mind
You don’t hold me the way you used to
Something changed
I know our love story came to an end
I know you want someone else
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On July 25th 2008 shadow211477kb Said :
shadow211477kb Wow that very well written. It's so sad though.I felt that way not long ago. That's life and that's love..waht can we do?
On June 27th 2008 gotmilk1994 Said :
gotmilk1994 wow woderfully written and yes i know i can't spell.
On June 27th 2008 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord Oooo ouch! brilliantly written!!
On June 25th 2008 smile4evr Said :
smile4evr awwwwwwww!! im so sorry!!! i felt that way once...love this one though
On June 23rd 2008 hirschey11 Said :
hirschey11 thats so sad!!! but it was well writen!
On June 23rd 2008 Thuggishone Said :
Thuggishone I like your style in writing and your thinking even at the worst moments possitive thoughts.great
On June 22nd 2008 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 intuition is a bitch sometimes. this i know
On June 20th 2008 chickenbroth Said :
chickenbroth great, again. you summed it up very well.
On June 20th 2008 moosegurl01 Said :
moosegurl01 wow..nice work.
On June 20th 2008 williamscott7 Said :
williamscott7 That's really sad... I hope you can feel better soon! GOD BLESS YOU!
On June 19th 2008 TheBranster Said :
TheBranster well, as long as he was good to you and made you feel good for however long it was, at least he was there. have to accept that not all people are much dedicated
On June 19th 2008 icsgrad07 Said :
icsgrad07 wow, yup im in the same position check out my last two peoms. tell me what you think
On June 19th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x you left me speechless. Very breathtaking I should say. Awesome job!