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Waiting for You 3rd & Final PartRate this Poem
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The Last Poem
Thought if I waited for you
You’d comeback to my arms
But I was just seeing my life pass me by
Day by day slowly deteriorating inside
Wasting my every breath over time
Writing you letters & shedding tears
I was blinded by what I thought was love
And didn’t see what was
Right in front of me all along
Now that I’ve managed to move on
And that my life is back on track
You return and expect me to take you back
I’ve shed enough tears
I’m done waiting for you
I have nothing else to give
I lost time and you had your chance
You won't hear from me again
I've written you the last poem
| On June 27th 2008 gotmilk1994 Said : | |
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wow i can so totally relate, i have been blinded by love before. |
| On June 27th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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nicly consructed and thought out and the last line just rounds the poem off beautifully. well done Rene! |
| On June 25th 2008 smile4evr Said : | |
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sad...but a good poem! |
| On June 23rd 2008 hirschey11 Said : | |
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i can totally relate to this one! its great! |
| On June 23rd 2008 Thuggishone Said : | |
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Another poem of emotion and even at it's hardest times there not angry words very nicely written well respected for a young man your age. |
| On June 22nd 2008 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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i like |
| On June 20th 2008 chickenbroth Said : | |
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this is great. |
| On June 20th 2008 moosegurl01 Said : | |
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This is a really good poem. |
| On June 20th 2008 williamscott7 Said : | |
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It's so sad... I'm glad you could move on! GOD BLESS YOU! |
| On June 19th 2008 TheBranster Said : | |
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this isnt last poem, there about 2 more. nice, though |
| On June 19th 2008 icsgrad07 Said : | |
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wow, yea i gave up loving the one who didnt love me, i like it, great poem |
| On June 19th 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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wow *thummbs up* |


