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Out of This World
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Created on 4-30-08
It’s an incredible feeling
I get whenever you look at me
Your smile is mesmerizing
And your eyes sparkle
Like the stars in the dark sky
Whenever I’m around you
I get this sensation inside
Something out of this world
Something I can’t describe
I can’t believe it’s happening to me
Like angels in heaven, love is sublime
I thought it was impossible
But you’ve sparked a feeling inside
I haven’t felt in a long time…
Please Login to post comments| On September 18th 2008 shadow211477kb Said : | |
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awww it's sweet and happy and uplifting. Good job! i love it! |
| On May 5th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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Nice!!! |
| On May 3rd 2008 CiaraNUMBA4 Said : | |
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i love it!! |
| On May 1st 2008 deshanna13 Said : | |
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awww....so cute!i loved this poem.make more =] |
| On May 1st 2008 ALICHELLA16 Said : | |
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lmfao to the kid that first commented and yeah im feeling this, i like the words your chose |
| On May 1st 2008 gotmilk1994 Said : | |
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Great Job!!!^.^ |
| On May 1st 2008 drummajorpod Said : | |
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It is an incredible feeling. =] Nice work! |
| On May 1st 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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aww I love these emotions! Keep up the great work! :) |
| On May 1st 2008 chickp96 Said : | |
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That is really awesome. You really poured your feelings out.... |
| On May 1st 2008 Snooky9e Said : | |
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awwww...i luvz it...i feel the same way about someone in my life... |
| On May 1st 2008 dropdeadsucka Said : | |
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Nice job. =] |
| On May 1st 2008 TheBranster Said : | |
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if she is outta this world, WATCH OUT! I heard anal probing isnt that pleasent |
