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Comeback [Waiting for You Part 2]
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Created on 4-29-08
I haven't given up
I know it in my heart without a doubt
You will turn around and comback
I felt time slowly pass me by
Every moment became a dark memory
Like shatered glass
Each piece piercing my heart
Sleepless nights and lifeless days
Kept trying to find myself but I lost my way
Dangerous thoughts ran through my mind
But I bore the pain and kept my head up
As I past on opportunities to move on
I stood my ground and decided to stay
In case you ever changed your mind
And decided to comeback
You'd find me where you left me
I still believe you'll come back one day
And we'll be together once again...
Please Login to post comments| On August 3rd 2008 Kagemitsu888 Said : | |
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Good job man, kinda reminds me of some of my own material they I posted "Unrequited" and "Unrequited Pt. 2 (Jaded) they are very simular to this cause its about when I put my life on hold for a person I loved as well. |
| On July 25th 2008 shadow211477kb Said : | |
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I'm glad there is a second part to my favorite of your poems and i like this one almost as much as i like the first! |
| On May 5th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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Cool!! but please dont wait tooo long. |
| On April 30th 2008 TheBranster Said : | |
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if you truly loved him and or her, you would respect his or hers decision. though, it would be sad, you would love them enough to just let them go. |
| On April 29th 2008 hirschey11 Said : | |
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loved it KMP |
| On April 29th 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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*thumbs up* I know the feeling :) |
