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They Don't Know
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Created on 4-28-08
They don't know you
The way I do
I see a side of you no one else does
They see a tough front that you put
I see a loving, and caring human being
They all gave you crap through
The rough spots we had
No matter what they say
It's just you and me
In the end of the day
Let them talk, say and think
What they want
Pay no attention to what they do
Let them think I'm dumb
For coming back to you
They just don't comprehend
How much I love you...
The way I do
I see a side of you no one else does
They see a tough front that you put
I see a loving, and caring human being
They all gave you crap through
The rough spots we had
No matter what they say
It's just you and me
In the end of the day
Let them talk, say and think
What they want
Pay no attention to what they do
Let them think I'm dumb
For coming back to you
They just don't comprehend
How much I love you...
Please Login to post comments| On May 5th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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Aww that was really nice!! if i may say in your line "In the end of the day" it may sound better if you had said "at the end of the day" other than that this was really ..... awww!!! |
| On May 1st 2008 deshanna13 Said : | |
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aww this is cute and i loves it! |
| On April 30th 2008 TheBranster Said : | |
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they didnt know untl you postede this up |
| On April 29th 2008 drummajorpod Said : | |
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Awwww.. that's really special. =] Great work. I love the thoughts behind the words.. |
| On April 29th 2008 hirschey11 Said : | |
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ahh this one has a meaning to me too! all your poems do!!!! KMP |
| On April 28th 2008 dropdeadsucka Said : | |
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Dude this describes what my ex did. |
| On April 28th 2008 CiaraNUMBA4 Said : | |
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luv it |
| On April 28th 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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Nicely written! Keep up the great work! |
