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Breaking Point
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Created on 4-1-08
There’s only so much I take
Before I completely break
I can only wait for so long
Before I realize I gotta move on
You keep pushing me away
And I just don’t understand
If there’s nothing you can give
And nothing you can say
Let’s just go separate ways
I’m standing on the edge
Losing grip, going out of my mind
I’m searching for something impossible to find
I’m a step away from the edge
About to lose my head
There’s limit that can be crossed and at that time
Everything becomes meaningless
I gave everything I had
But it was never enough
You’re heart belongs to someone else
And mine is ready to go on…
Please Login to post comments| On September 25th 2008 lovin5life Said : | |
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Ah...im going through this right now, but i don't know if i can let him go because, he makes me feel so alive..it's hard...so hard |
| On May 2nd 2008 deshanna13 Said : | |
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great!your a great poem.you make it sound like people been through it even if they haven't.great form of words too.=D |
| On April 29th 2008 hirschey11 Said : | |
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aww thats so sad but really well writen! kmp! |
| On April 2nd 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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nice job!! and if you ever need a hand to hold you up, take my! |
| On April 1st 2008 williamscott7 Said : | |
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Wow, it conveys so many emotions at once! It has sadness, anger, and acceptance all in one! Great job! |
| On April 1st 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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aws so emotional *hugs* me likey |
