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My Poems
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24
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WITHOUT YOU |
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12
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The Boy, The Couple, And The Gun... |
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8
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Zero |
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17
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Roses Bleed Red |
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14
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No One's Father |
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10
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Mouth Shut |
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13
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Paper Heart |
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11
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Nerd |
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15
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Heartache |
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8
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A better place |
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20
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That Fire in your eyes |
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10
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Suffocating |
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6
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Beserk |
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On and On and On |
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I will always love you |
To Live...
with every passing moment comes this thought
That I was never nothing more, Threw my life away
To sit here and ROT!
I LET MY LIFE SLIP THROUGH LIKE WATER
FLOWING THROUGH MY FINGERS
WHAT AM I NOW?
WATCH THESE MEMORIES DIE BEFORE ME
LETTING GO OF EVERYONE, NOT NEEDING ANYONE!
I'VE LOST A CAUSE!
It was long ago, that I threw in the towel and said
I'd keep digging this hole, And try my best to fill it up with things
I could've been, Blinding myself from the possibilities within.
But as I sit here now, Covered in dust and regrets...
I slap myself, Wondering "what if"
What if
I could take it all back?
JUST GIVE ME A CHANCE!
I'M TIRED OF ASKING!
I'M TIRED OF THIS
TIRED OF WONDERING
TIRED OF EVERYTHING I NEVER DID!
Sitting in this chair
As I look back at my life
All those wasted years
I would FIGHT FOR TO LIVE!
I slowly fade away now
Life flashing before my eyes
The only problem is
As it flashed, IT QUICKLY DIED!
re-walk these steps
TO FIND SOME ATONEMENT!
re-trace my life
FOR A REASON TO BREATHE!
re-do the things
THAT I NEVER DID
Burn these small memories
AS I SIT HERE FORGetting what it's like to live...
Please Login to post comments| On July 5th 2009 MammothJoey Said: |
| Wow. this was amazing :D Like really good :) |
| On February 24th 2009 EvilRaven9892 Said: |
| emotion packed! omg it was amazing |
| On February 23rd 2009 elvira2196 Said: |
| Nice Job! |
| On February 23rd 2009 Realmuckoy Said: |
| Thanks Texacan, that sure means a lot |
| On February 23rd 2009 sweetmedebe Said: |
| awesome!!! i loved it!;D |
| On February 23rd 2009 TexacanPirate Said: |
| My God!!!!!!!!!!! I DARESAY THAT IS THE BEST POEM I HAVE EVER READ IN MY LIFE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU'RE A TRUE POET! You mix cliche with modern passion! It's excentric!!!! |
| On February 23rd 2009 mellymellyyay Said: |
| idk if its just my computer but words broken up :/
but other then that its just amazing!!!! :D |
| On February 23rd 2009 Realmuckoy Said: |
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| yes sir max... Most definitely those Caps are Death growls and grunts :) |
| On February 23rd 2009 TheWiraffe Said: |
| its good. l like it |
| On February 23rd 2009 max5892 Said: |
| wow...this is awsome and would totaly be a great metal song =D. Can i assume that the capital letters would be screamy deathy vocals? because if so, that would make it all the more awsome. |
| On February 23rd 2009 Sunloverz Said: |
| Omg .. this fits me in so well , you really captured the emotion well .. WOW great job |
| On February 23rd 2009 annmarie1991 Said: |
| its good. i like it. :) |
| On February 23rd 2009 BuNnYoo7 Said: |
| wow very nice. |
| On February 23rd 2009 Realmuckoy Said: |
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| all words in CAPS are screaming sections, all words lowercase are clean vocals :) |
