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And her name was....
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Created on 1-3-08
I remember the first
time I looked into her eyes
and held all night long
Nothing could go wrong!
and the sound of her voice
a melody...... that soon
drifted me to sleep
and i layed there my arm
around her
but secretly I stared!
I held her close...
stared into her eyes
Never wanting to let go
Her lips pressed up against mine
and My love began to grow!
I could smell her shining hair
as I exaled and released all
despair
The sweet smell of strawberries
And the brightnees... glare!
She stroked her hand
up and down....
and looked deep into my eyes
Her eyes, like a hurricane
sucking me into this night!
and as I lay here beside her
I can't help think
that we were meant for
eachother....
and into the night we
sink!!!
Her smile a weapon
that always works
on me
She makes me the man I am
and soaked with her love...
IT'S ALL I NEED!!!!
I hold her
and I kiss her
Well into the night
I love her
and I need her
She's the Best thing in my life!
and when that gleam in her
eyes gets stuck into my head
I can't believe she's mine!
I love you... is what I said..
and every ounce of
sadness has now
dropped down to none
and this night
one of many
and her name was....
Please Login to post comments| On April 1st 2008 sicxmagot Said : | |
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yea ... what was your name... |
| On February 12th 2008 DeathMetalPunk Said : | |
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I know exactly how you feel. Dude, this is seriously one of the best poems(or songs or whatever you want to call it) thhat I've read on here. |
| On January 5th 2008 lisaljb Said : | |
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Wow this is deep, indeed a lot of passion in this one, very nice! |
| On January 3rd 2008 native07mlj Said : | |
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interesting... |
