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Hang Down Low
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Created on 12-6-07
Feeling so down
so low
Never regain my
strenth!
my spirit remains
below
Behind this empty
smile
Would you walk the
mile?
(My heart begins to crumble)
Inside!
I open my mouth to
scream
But comes out no
sound
Wake me from this
Dream
The blood just hits the
ground
(My life flashes before my...)
Eyes!
This fate I can't
escape
Lead the way my
friend
The blind leading the
blind
We'll never find our way
(Time begins to take its....)
Toll!
My life ends with a
Bang!
My body lifelessly
Hangs!
As I lie bleeding on the
floor!
(Why is it you ignore....
me?
What have I done?
To deserve....
This misery?
To deserve
Your wrath
Your endless
mindless
heartless
stabs?
My Life has reached its
end
My breaking point
Seems as if my life
only just began...)
My past is one big
scar
You can't help me seal this
wound
My life is torn
apart
I will die off
soon
Laok at this painted
face
As I my life begins
fade
Wash the pain
away
Leave me feeling
dosed
My life a huge
mistake
My head hangs down
low...
Please Login to post comments| On December 15th 2007 Aleera00 Said : | |
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I love this, it's really good! |
| On December 11th 2007 sicxmagot Said : | |
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Meh ... If u only Knew |
| On December 9th 2007 browneyes33 Said : | |
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I really like this, It's depressing but full of raw emotion. Good job! |
