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Suffocating
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Created on 11-15-07
When the day is dead
And when the lights shut out
When the silence feels your head
And when your body shuts down.....
It's over
All over
Chorus:
Excuses, Excuses
Use as distractions
Grasping for air
You just can't imagine
My breath getting shorter
I can't breathe anymore!
This suffocation, can't be ignored! -X2
When your life fades away
And the words echoe
When blood becomes a stain
You can't shut out what you know
It's over
All over
Again
Chorus:
Excuses, Excuses
Use as distractions
Grasping for air
You just can't imagine
My breath getting shorter
I can't breathe anymore!
This suffocation, can't be ignored! -X2
I'm suffocating!!!!
Falling so low
so deep
The darkness
begins to creep
It overshadows
overpowers
me....
I can't overcome
these feelings
Can't undo
my sins
Live with my
life,
With what I've
been
BUT CAN I?
This air thick
with regret!
Choking on
all these threats
Take it in
Finish it
Let it sink in
Now let
the pain
begin!!!!
I'm suffocating!!!! -X4
Chorus:
Excuses, Excuses
Use as distractions
Grasping for air
You just can't imagine
My breath getting shorter
I can't breathe anymore!
This suffocation, can't be ignored!
Please Login to post comments| On December 5th 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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I can't explain exactly what it is, but there's something about this that I love! |
| On November 18th 2007 MelissaDA Said : | |
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i really like this. it is awesome. i love the flow and the rythym here. great job hun! |
| On November 17th 2007 DeathMetalPunk Said : | |
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I like this too. It's awesome I can feel the mood and hear the message great! woo! |
| On November 16th 2007 stics917 Said : | |
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i like this |
| On November 15th 2007 sicxmagot Said : | |
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Eep! i think i heard this one before.. you showedeede me one Hehehe
SINGLE
NOW!!
ROXXY!!
COPY!!
NOOOW!!
If you need help lol tell me... my friend andy and my ex jeph are kinda in a band together |
