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burns right through my soul....Rate this Poem
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That Fire in your eyes
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Created on 11-15-07
Why when you look at me,
Does the hatred make me scream
And why when you say those words,
Does my soul fade and burn.
And why are you unfeeling with me
What have I done to deserve you fury
And now that your so cold
I can only look back, to the times now sold
And that fire in your eyes
burns right through my soul
I can feel that you despise...
And now that you've let me go
You hate everything in me
Your coldness now takes its toll...
ON ME!!!!!!
Your bitterness is a kind of shot
Everything I thought you were, tied in a knot
It punctures and rips my spirit
Your anger that now you submit
And now that times have changed
The pain you have now over-ranged
Your malice is just so cold
Leaves me feeling less bold...
and that fire in your eyes
burns right through my soul
I can feel that you despise...
And now that you've let me go
You hate everything in me
Your coldness now takes its toll...
ON ME!!!!!!
That Fire....
That Fire in your eyes!
That Fire....
That Fire in your eyes!
Through my soul!!!!
Through my life!!!!
Through my heart!!!!
Through me!!!!
Please Login to post comments| On August 9th 2008 hiddenlotus Said : | |
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Butal man..you should make it to a for this shit man. |
| On July 21st 2008 rebelshawtieyo Said : | |
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Sounds like you are raging in this poem and this poem is very revealing and deep i love it alot !! =) |
| On December 5th 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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Love the anger in this! |
| On November 19th 2007 Realmuckoy Said : | |
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I'M BETTER NOW, JUST KINDA WENT THROUGH SOME.... STUFF.
IDK, I JUST DON'T FEEL LIKE TALKING ABOUT IT..... |
| On November 18th 2007 MelissaDA Said : | |
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are you okay hun? i agree with sicxmagot... |
| On November 17th 2007 DeathMetalPunk Said : | |
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yea kinda scary. But I like it. Scary can be good in many cases. |
| On November 15th 2007 sicxmagot Said : | |
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Dude .. Is everything ok? Cuz your message worries me. and YOU KNOW you an tell me anything. because i really do worry about you |
