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What a Blind Man Sees

Views (49) Passion Created on 3-26-08 Flag

I can hear the wind

I can hear her roar

I can hear the pain

I can hear no more

 

I can feel my fears

I can feel the core

I can feel the tears

I can feel no more

 

I can taste your stink

I can taste the shore

I can taste the stars

I can taste no more

 

I can smell the air

I can smell the floor

I can smell the rain

I can smell no more

 

I sense the pain

I sense the tears

I sense your age

I sense your fears

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On April 4th 2008 stef4732 Said :
stef4732 I like the repitition
On April 4th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth OOPS Went to thumb up and reread your title. HE'S BLIND!!! Now it makes sense!!! lol Sorry about that forgot to tie the two together as I read it. haha
On April 4th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth hmmmmmmmm I'm not sure if i get it? I've read it a couple of times and I still feel like I am missing what your intent was here. Maybe Michelle is on to something in that now the person is gone??? This one puzzled me a bit. :) Maybe it's over my head. Swoosh
On April 3rd 2008 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane I like the endingings of the first 4 stanzas-like w/ sight gone, he is gone or something like that.
On March 27th 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem Beautiful but....I can taste your stink? Whats that about? Is like a preety smell or bad?