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She came in the Night

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Views (220) Love Created on 1-9-08 Flag

After all the tension,

She came to me,

My fears were relieved,

The less i wanna care the more i do,

Is there something wrong,

That fear hasn't yet ascended,

Like an angel she has reborn me,

My rebirth will be my ever devotion. 

 

 

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On April 18th 2008 Kymburleighx3 Said :
Kymburleighx3 Hmm, I wish you had made it longer. It would have really gotten to me. I think I shall re-read it. Because when I'm reading this, I feel almost as if I'm in the presence of you, and it's something worth reading.
On February 24th 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 That'spretty all right, I liked that, Devotion is a good thing as long as it knows its limits
On February 15th 2008 i2am2hayley2PM Said :
i2am2hayley2PM so you were sad because you didn't have her...and then she came and things got worse?????????
Oh but anywho, it was good
On February 14th 2008 Babydotz Said :
Babydotz Short and sweet I like it.
On February 2nd 2008 madmarcus Said :
madmarcus I really like this one. Im not a positive person either so..yeah. nice
On January 18th 2008 RalRasper Said :
RalRasper or so i thought