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Longing For Love |
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More to life |
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Falling Up |
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Good Ol' Days |
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Longing For Love
Longing for love, Will it come from this place or does it come from above,
I pour out my heart, only to have it crushed, like a sound inside me that cant be hushed,
So much to give, but no one in need, One lovely lady will be lucky indeed,
My emotions over flowing twenty four seven, Is she in this world or already in heaven,
Wanting to kiss and share my feelings, To find love will be ultimate healing,
Loneliness eats away at my existence, every time there is promise it ends in resistance,
No one to tell how happy they make me, but I'll keep on looking as long as it takes me,
No one to touch, no one to hold, Its like being left outside in the cold,
Maybe one day Ill find my one and only, Until then Ill continue on lonely,
Not knowing love is a Life of waste, I'd settle for anything even a taste,
Too have this much love and no one to share, shows you why I've lived this life without care,
But i know shes out there, she has to be, no one was meant to feel pain like me,
Maybe its Karma maybe its bad luck, either way i cant move i'm stuck
To my dear love i hope u find me or i find you, because living life with out love i don't know what to do.
| On July 3rd 2008 curkaxboo Said : | |
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wow.
this is really good! |
| On July 2nd 2008 RalRasper Said : | |
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Haha Spider u still cant admit it |
| On June 25th 2008 MaddieR38006 Said : | |
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aww i like this poem :D its cute! |
| On June 19th 2008 speederspider Said : | |
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Nice poem but if you go around acting like a freak then you are never going to have the opportunity to meet a nice girl. Just some friendly advice. |
| On May 7th 2008 AsianSin Said : | |
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I didn't know you had it in ya! ;) Well done, hun! |
| On April 21st 2008 AdamGontier13 Said : | |
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aww ral its cute*sniffle sniffle* wahhhhhh!!!!!!lol. |
| On April 16th 2008 smile4evr Said : | |
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Thats sweet! |
| On February 24th 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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very much excellent! I absolutely loved that one, it was, well, to steal a phrase from marcus, it was very lyrical, Definitely loved it!! |
| On February 20th 2008 California1516 Said : | |
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awww very nicely written!! |
| On February 16th 2008 Tiffiscool16 Said : | |
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I truly felt this ones words. Excellent! |
| On February 15th 2008 i2am2hayley2PM Said : | |
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oooooh i agree!!!!! you should seriously work this out on a guitar!!!!!!!...but good job! it all rhymes so well, and it's very thoughtful... |
| On February 14th 2008 Babydotz Said : | |
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Aww its sweet I like it. Lol I can never write anything like this. Why did you write this then "Fuck Me"????? Very different |
| On February 2nd 2008 madmarcus Said : | |
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very lyrical. If you play any guitar your all set |
| On January 22nd 2008 Autumnr1 Said : | |
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love sux! sometimes you want to give up everytime you get your heart stopped on. |
| On December 26th 2007 devilyangelic Said : | |
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Its pretty good a flaw here and there but as for that its good |


