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where is the love?
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Created on 5-9-07
Where is the love.
I cant live without in this,
Low state of mind.
Please Login to post comments| On August 1st 2007 glinka07 Said : | |
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4-7-4 syllables... must 5-7-5
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| On June 16th 2007 hackerlord Said : | |
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i kinda gree with tswieberg would work better it would be longer.. but good short poem |
| On May 16th 2007 tswieberg Said : | |
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really short, I think it would be an awesome poem if you added more to it. |
| On May 11th 2007 Raiden21 Said : | |
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it means what happen to the love i used to feel whenever i was down |
| On May 9th 2007 Etain13McCloud Said : | |
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last two lines don't make much sense. I think I like where it is going, but it is a little fuzzled. |
