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Notes From A Suicidal Mind
There have been lies,
There have been stories
Somewhere I lost my way
I just want to mean something to someone
I wanted to be a star, a glimmer of light
Instead I am a dark cloud, churning and stirring
Consumed by my own plight
Misery and loneliness are now my being
I cannot found a way out
I just want to stop feeling
Nothing has been what it seems from me
My past, my future, all fictional history
Do I feel with a heart
Do I have a heart at all
Is my soul alive
Or has it crumbled away like a leaf in the fall
I just want to know that I am forgiven for what I have said and done
But there is no reason to forgive
I am truly no one
I would cry for help I would shout out “SOMEONE PLEASE”
But it would fall on deaf ears and hearts bled dry
No tears would be shed, not from a single eye
There is no hope I can see
There is no pain I have not felt
If my life were to end this night, it would be just as well
Please Login to post comments| On May 4th 2007 marlana79 Said: |
| beautiful:) |
| On May 2nd 2007 a7x4lyfbitch Said: |
| i love this poem. i have a few poems myself, lol. i really like this one. [: |
| On May 2nd 2007 danaeissexy Said: |
| im sorry but i right about this stuff and i have to goto a counclaer and its not fun so u NEED HELP! |
| On May 2nd 2007 Skyeee09 Said: |
| These people who don't even know u say u need to get help and shit and change things like that...they say they know what it's like but really they have no idea. i am here. I cover up so no one sees the real me. I am what I feel people want me to be just so I can fit in but I really want my life 2 end. Not like it would matter 2 me. But oh well neways yeah that's all I wanted 2 say..peace out. Nice poem too by the way. |
| On May 2nd 2007 Zing18 Said: |
| .... life is not all about love... and even if u dont see it, there are ppl who love you, and care for u... u just need to be the stronger one and rise up against eveything else, and wonce u do u will be more powerful and able to do anything u set ur mind to... u dont need to sit in a corrner crying... u need to walking tall looking proud with ur chin raised hi... if for no one else but for u alone... and u can become anthing u want to be! |
| On May 2nd 2007 atmercedes Said: |
| Well. I think you should go see someone for help. Life shouldnt be that bad, and if it is you should do something about it.. i have been there. GET HELP! Its not worth it, really its not. |
| On May 2nd 2007 Foreverlyn Said: |
| I felt like this and it's been a year since my life changed, change comes from within, it's not easy but peopple are a great support just reach out for them because they can't know what you are thinking if you don't let them know. If it helps read some of my writing I have been through this, you are not alone. :) |
| On April 30th 2007 angeleyez7779 Said: |
| That is a good piece of work. SO many people feel that way. |
| On April 30th 2007 shadowwolf490 Said: |
| thats wut i fell all the time. iv never really found something like that that relates to my life like that . and i wonder how many ppl say they feel like this and r just liars |
| On April 30th 2007 blutess Said: |
| hhmm, i liked it. really good. |
| On April 30th 2007 blakestheparty Said: |
| that hits home |
| On April 30th 2007 laurenisawesom Said: |
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| aw i feel like this sometimes. :[ |
| On April 30th 2007 ldp123 Said: |
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| That is how I feel!!! |
