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a "Diamante" style poem

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Created: 05/07 2007
Views: 209
Category: Other

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Watch Your Mouth

                              Thought
                        profound, deep
                roaming, feeling, probing
            tacit, cunning, cogent, explicit
            chattering, gossiping, babbling
                             casual, glib
                                Speech

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On January 29th 2008 seekerovtruth Said: 
seekerovtruth What was once profound and deep, becomes casual and glib when we speak. I love it!!!
On July 27th 2007 cbewing Said: 
cbewing dang, I looked up Diamante to receive a better understanding of your meaning, but alas, I shall have to read his works when time allows.
On July 27th 2007 cbewing Said: 
cbewing I love the way you show the path from Thought to Speech, great job!
On June 15th 2007 mcihellejane Said: 
mcihellejane I absolutely love this one. Excellent job!
On June 6th 2007 dureall Said: 
dureall I like the way it's shaped like a shroom. I love it.
On June 1st 2007 Lindseyk1989 Said: 
Lindseyk1989 Wow different but really cool. =D ♥ Lindsey
On May 19th 2007 PoeticPang Said: 
PoeticPang huh????... oke,, so i don't know some of the words u used,,, but,, wow,,, i guess i better watch my mouth now,,, ,,, i kinda was thinking ,, hmmm... it,,, well,, because of the title,, u meant a different kinda thing,,, idk????....ergh,,,, this is confusing,,, ~_~#
On May 18th 2007 brokenwing3 Said: 
brokenwing3 what is in your mind will eventually come out