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Fake Society
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Created on 4-23-07
Hold your head up girl
Put a smile on
Your living a lie
Just play along
Everyones fake
So just join the crowd
Your parents would be so proud
Get sucked in
It's the cool thing
Let them break you in
It shouldn't sting
Pretend nothings wrong
This is the hardest act in the play called Life
But be the best actress your under spot light
Don't say your hurt
You'll be treated like dirt
Don't show your real emotion
Use lies as your motivation
Program yourself, be robotic
Make everything real feel sick
Do all this just to fit in
Go out just to flaunt your fake skin
And now that your a part of society
You ruined everything you dreamed you could be
Though i guess you could be proud of where you stand
Now you can really be called an American
Please Login to post comments| On April 23rd 2007 blah2blah Said : | |
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This is amazing and definitely true. I like how you wrote it; the format and the the topic is a major eyecatcher. |
| On April 23rd 2007 XxjustxmexX Said : | |
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omg i love it its sooo true about america now! |
| On April 23rd 2007 blutess Said : | |
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very good. loved how u wrote it. |
| On April 23rd 2007 jmh1011 Said : | |
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i like it so true!!!!! |
| On April 23rd 2007 chickenbroth Said : | |
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wow, so true. real peotry makes people think, this will make people think. Rock on. |
| On April 23rd 2007 KathLoOnie Said : | |
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I love the last line. |
| On April 23rd 2007 Dracular Said : | |
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That was pretty cool and true |
