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Created on 4-5-07
Bleeding, bleeding
Suicide feeling
Not hearing, not seeing
Defend by the sounds of you’re past
Blinded by your life memories
Wondering how long this will last
Look at where life has drove you to be
Regretting you’re mistakes even more
Paralyzed on your floor
The sudden feeling of comfort comes about
As your veins spill blood like spouts
You’re life pictures fade away and your numb
You know after this Your done
Everythings dark, that was at first bright
You’re last breathe will be taken tonight
No time for goodbyes, sorries or sorrows
Tonight will be the end of you’re tomorrows
Please Login to post comments| On May 15th 2007 pmillertimep Said : | |
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you have a good ear for sound. keep it up. you should try writing some traditional poetry with a meter. you have some skill. |
| On May 9th 2007 fgggfx Said : | |
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what movie was it? |
| On April 18th 2007 fgggfx Said : | |
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luv it! great poem |
| On April 18th 2007 dureall Said : | |
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good stuff, agrees with the peep below me. |
| On April 15th 2007 joppysgirl Said : | |
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LOVE THIS!!! |
| On April 15th 2007 villageidot Said : | |
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wow, ok... so apparently my favorite just changed to this one....
its amazing |
| On April 13th 2007 KathLoOnie Said : | |
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o.O.. Spell check. You're= You are. Otherwise, amazing. |
