Purp7eFi7th

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Mom...

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Created on 3-29-07

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Always b*tching about my looks

You tell me how i should read different books

Every time i see you, you have something to argue about

We can never actually speak, just scream and shout

People say "mothers and daughters make best friends"

What happened to us? Where did our love end?

I get good grades and i look like me

What is it that you want me to do? Who do you want me to be?

You said i need to give you respect since i'm the child and your the mother

We need to really get away from each other

Tell everyone i'm your problem, I'm an embarassment

One day I'm going to snap on you for all your harassment

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On May 9th 2007 xxlostsoul14xx Said :

	That reminds me of how well my dad & i get along. good job!

On April 29th 2007 sabrinadeleon Said :

	i really like it but im not trying to be mean im just trying to put my opinion in that doesnt matter but the line We need to really get away from each other to make it more fluent with the poem and take out the break in it when it is read well it would fit right if it were We really need to get... other than that i think it is awesome and i hope i didnt make it sound wrong or you took it the wrong way cuz i really like it

On April 20th 2007 fgggfx Said :

	i LoVe the last line of this poem

On April 18th 2007 KathLoOnie Said :

	I really like this one. It fits you and your psychotic mother quite well. Also fits me and my mother. Then again, all mothers are bitches. Though.. embarrassment and haraassment look like they ryhme. they don't. but shhh... 8] I still love it.

On April 2nd 2007 dureall Said :

	I didn't get along to well with my dad either.