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Run Away Dreams
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Created on 3-9-07
Dream you're favorite dream everyday
So you can runaway
Have better days
Escape you're life
Escape from strife
On your own
Your better off alone
No one to hold your hand
Under no ones demand
You feel so free
Be who you want to be
Even create a new identity
Smiling, laughing and oh so happy
Get away from mommy and daddy
Your in a world you can't do wrong in
But after time, this picture perfect world fades away
It's time to start your day
Wake up, home
Laying on your bed
Wishing you were long gone
Or able to dream forever, dead
Please Login to post comments| On August 14th 2008 derXluftbar Said : | |
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this is good. you should write songs for a living or something |
| On September 28th 2007 xxxAngelicaxxx Said : | |
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i love it! |
| On May 14th 2007 tswieberg Said : | |
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Awesome poem! |
| On May 8th 2007 mrskritter Said : | |
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nice job |
| On May 8th 2007 xxlostsoul14xx Said : | |
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I love this. |
| On April 22nd 2007 kristenfmd20 Said : | |
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i think it was great! |
| On April 18th 2007 fgggfx Said : | |
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wow, straight foward and inspirational.very nice |
| On April 15th 2007 villageidot Said : | |
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i dont know why, but it seems more like lyrics than a poem
maybe if you switched it up a bit and incorperated a chorus and beat...
thatd be rad
but, thats just me |
| On April 13th 2007 KathLoOnie Said : | |
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I saw the original copy. I love then ending. |
| On April 2nd 2007 dureall Said : | |
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Powerful impact in your writng. I like it tremendously. |
| On March 20th 2007 Javellef Said : | |
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That dream world where we can be all the things that we want to be. Nice write! |
| On March 9th 2007 Laralei Said : | |
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I really like this. |
