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I feel so much better :D

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Created: 05/31 2009
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Category: Passion

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Finally

Finally ended what you did to me,

Severed the heavy chains,

Set myself free,

And forgot the pains.

 

Can't believe it took so long,

Not to hurt when I saw your face,

But now nothings wrong,

Because a new feeling's taken it's place.

 

Rebuilt the strength you broke,

Managed to move ahead,

And didn't choke,

I was happy instead.

 

And the world didn't end,

Because to your spell,

I didn't bend,

But i finally left that hell.

 

I broke the curse the set on me,

Freed my own soul,

And now I can see,

My heart was always whole.

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On July 24th 2009 elvira2196 Said: 
elvira2196 Very good... I wonder what you will be writing about in a year from now. Your work is fantastic! Keep writing.
On June 7th 2009 perdylilpyro Said: 
perdylilpyro this is fantastic, keep writing
On May 31st 2009 XXFictitiousXX Said: 
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On May 31st 2009 Danii15 Said: 
Danii15 Awesome.:)